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Final Day
The future left to be controlled by the minds of the young, not old,
I sit here now as I was told; to venture out would be too bold.
Silently I sit and I wait for a goal that may come too late,
or may well not ingratiate, but rather set a sort of date
to follow through this future here while I sit and wait, half in fear,
of what may happen to my dear, my friend, my love, I long to hear
the sound of her voice one last time, before they come to draw the line
of my fate, shall then all decline, their acts anything but benign.
A dreaded thought enters my head, which fills my poor heart up with dread.
After all now that has been said, who's to say who will wind up dead?
I hear them now coming for me; I do not try to run or flee.
There's no point, but why oh why me? I've done nothing wrong, can't they see?
Signaling the final hour, the once sweet clock chime turned sour;
as they come, they'll have the power, death upon me they will shower.
As the time draws ever nearer, gazing through the shattered mirror,
it could not be any clearer, unable to hide my terror;
in the end it will be my way of how my life will turn to gray.
Alas my love, I'm sad to say, this is to be my final day...
- by Aislene Drossel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/23/2008 |
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- Title: Final Day
- Artist: Aislene Drossel
- Description: Written in trochaic octameter, something I've been experimenting around with. It's a little more difficult to find the words that fit, since each line is suppose to have a total of 16 syllables. I think it came out decent, regardless. *nods*
- Date: 09/23/2008
- Tags: final
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Utau_Misa_Misa_Chan - 05/29/2010
- FANTASTIC! Why in the world are you not famous? 5/5
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- the_real_thanyou - 09/24/2008
- wow nice form and choice of words made for an excellent combo 5/5
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- Arashii Kitsune - 09/24/2008
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I said it once, and I'll say it again. Absolutely amazing.
You be awesome x3 heart - Report As Spam
- grl_hawk4422312 - 09/23/2008
- i like it alot!
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