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i look around all i see
is her face looking back at me
i dont know why i see it there
the wind is flowing through her hair...
i see this girl in my dreams
but dreams are more real then they seem
i lie in bed just burning up
thinking about her while my smile goes up...
i can't get this girl out of my head
i feel like im hanging by a thread
and when i fall she's there for me
to give a hug and kiss to fill me with glee...
after 5 monthes i realize
i'll never see this girl with my own eyes
i lose all hope to find the one
i stay iside away from the sun...
a few years pass and im not sad
then a dream comes and it aint that bad
the girl returns into my head
even after all the things i said...
the next day i stare to think
about this girl and then i blink
I SEE THE GIRL THE REAL THING
i watch her closely and she starts to sing...
somway somehow i know this song
i run up to her a start singing along
she looks me and asks my how i know
the song she wrote long long ago...
she stares into my eyes and then with shock
she screams out loud like a coo coo clock
she says she sees me in her sleep
my love for her was so very deep...
our eyes connect and so do our lips
my skin can feel her finger tips
so i met the mystery girl the one from my dreams
but this relationship was not as it seemed...
i go to see her planed to be suprised
then i look and can't believe my eyes
another man has her in his hold
rubbing, kissing, my heart feels cold...
the fire i once felt in my heart
turns to ash as we become worlds apart
the love that was as tall as chinas wall
was not real and through the floor i fall
i go home with tears in my eyes
the girl i loved i now despize
until the day i find the one for me
i'll wait in heaven as my soul is now free...
- by 3rd son of sparda |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: love in dreams
- Artist: 3rd son of sparda
- Description: this is a poem based on an experience i hed with my X- girlfriend.
- Date: 09/09/2008
- Tags: love dreams
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kimono325 - 02/04/2009
- Okay, I'm going to tell you what I tell almost everyone else. THE RHYMES HOLD YOU BACK. This poem would be SO much better (and trust me, it's really good) if you used proper grammar, spelling, so on, and if you didn't force the rhymes. Just let it flow. That's all I can say. But I do love the idea of the poem. Very good, very good.
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- iMuffin x3 - 01/12/2009
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,amazing.
You write really good.
5/5
Rate back?
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- xX_Show_Me_Love_Xx - 09/12/2008
- I understand the pain u felt. I've had that feeling many times. I wish u the best
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