funny fod poem

• Artist: wizyoshi
• Description: its a poem i made of a story i made up its completley fictional !!!!
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: funnyfoodpoemwizyoshipie

one day as i reachd my home
all i heard was my stomach growl
i looked around
my mom wasnt there
nor my sisther
completley alone
i looked in the fridge
only to find it was more empty
then the house in fact
i looked and i looked
only to find spoiled scraps
after all hope was lost
my sigth saw something of inexplicable beauty
it was a dessert from our trip far away
i grabd it and started eating
it felt as if i was in heaven
made of chocolate and vanilla and something else
i kept eating not caring if something was left
until i felt weird
and this tougth went in my head
its you feeling great
your belly full
as i kept eating
something was wrong
i rushed to the miror
oh no
my face was swolen
i was alergic to the pie
oh no
i screm as soon i found out
i dropt a pice
after this i resumed eating it
what a fool i have been




base on no true story


3nodding

Comments

[even though im broken]

*sigh* work on typing please? and, what the heck? the format is... what?

its funny, but needs work. keep trying. ^_~;;

[Jesse The Eternal]

UHH YOU SPELLED COMPLETELY WRONG? and work on your typing....sorry had to say it..

[Tsuki Kurai]

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ok.
thats really bad.
there's no meter, the rhyming is bad, and where is your punctuation and grammar?
and whats with the sentence "based on no true story"? shouldnt it be "not based on a true story"?