Journaling Life

• Artist: Lievlam
• Description: From 2006, very short. It's also on Urbis, in case you made a web search. I appreciate any comments.
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: prose short poem journal journals

I always wanted to live,
So I started a journal;
And wrote to capture my world,
To make things real.

Inked on a page my life was
Crisp and
Sharp.
(And easy to remember.)

So I stepped up, you know,
To the metaphorical plate.
And I relived my life,
So that I could enjoy it.

Comments

[One Dandy Fop]

Pretty great. I really enjoyed your rhythm. It felt as if we were having a conversation. Doesn't it always look so neat and orderly on the page?