The hearts song

• Artist: iNeenee
• Description: This is my first time posting a poem of mine. so if its not really all that great please be nice about it. ^-^''' but yeah this comes from my own heart, i hate to sound like everyone else but this is about my boyfriend breaking up with me. but if you like it tell me, i will put up more if i get enough people saying they want more.
• Date: 07/24/2008
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You left my life.
Knowing that it would kill me.
My heart weeping, trying to call out to you
And I know you have heard this song before
Breaking so many other hearts
Though I need to tell you that this is a different song
Not of only pain but the love I still hold for you
Can you listen into my heart?
You still hold in your hands.
Can you hear the song its singing?
I know it’s loud and clear.
Singing the song of love that it has made for you?
It needs to hear your reply.
Other songs from other hearts
You might have heard bitter regrets
But in mine, it is only true longing
The song its singing is growing quiet.
It still wanting an answer

Comments

[exxxseada]

It's a good song, but I believe it needs a better ending.4/5 You should check out my songs and rate & comment on them. Trust me you'll like them. wink

[F-14D DemonLord]

nice

[omega760]

nice work! hope ya win! 5/5

[phoenix of japan]

i almost cried!

[smackin_elayne]

You did a wonderful job on this poem, I like reading your work, good job

[rock star emma]

u really should write another one.Its very touching.U even got to be his girlfriend but the one i like doesn't have any idea that i exist

[Mr_Ice 2707]

nice! 5 stars! be sure to check out my poems and songs!! C ya!!