my fear

• Artist: devildood659
• Description: i was strtolling through kirby park and i had my journal with me and here we go
• Date: 07/21/2008
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I am a man who walks alone
And when Im walking a dark road
At night or strolling through the park

When the light begins to change
I sometimes feel a little strange
A little anxious when its dark

Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a constant fear that someones always near
Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a phobia that someones allways there

Have you run your fingers down the wall
And have you felt your neck skin crawl
When youre searching for the light?
Sometimes when youre scared to take a look
At the corner of the room
Youve sensed that somethings watching you

Have you ever been alone at night
Thought you heard footsteps behind
And turned around and no ones there?
And as you quicken up your pace
You find it hard to look again
Because youre sure theres someone there

Watching horror films the night before
Debating wiches and folklore
The unkown troubles on your mind
Maybe your mind is playing tricks
You sense and suddenly eyes fix
On dancing shadows from behind

Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a constant fear that someones always near
Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a phobia that someones allways there

When Im walking a dark road
I am a man who walkes alone

Comments

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

different and profound. ok good job

[ji-an]

There's a number of spelling errors, i.e. "allways."

This is possibly one of the more bland poems I've seen. There's a few grammatical errors here and there, and I'm not really fond of repeat phrases in any poem. It's really simply written and the only part that actually lived up to the poem was the "Have you ever been alone in the dark" section.