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the Marionette
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the bow strings quiver
the feet step lightly
folding swirling twirling
knitting into each other
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each staccato note hangs
eerily by the stitched ends
of elegant hushed skirts
held by pale jeweled hands
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the sound of slippered feet
is lost to the low humming
of the woodwinds and the strings
that are pulling swaying stoic
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faceless slender men
dressed like scarecrows extend
their polite invitations to
the faceless painted ladies
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fingertips touch lightly
gloves made lined up together
like the hands of puppets
dainty sure purposeful
and smothered
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in perfect harmony
they plunge upon the beat
and recover smile curtsy
they show not the slightest need
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after one thousand
days of dancing
parched throats do not utter
the slightest complaint
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nor curse nor moan nor bother
do they to stop and rest
their winding dancing feet
or loose their tight bodices
or remove their stiff cummerbunds
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the crescendo retreats
into a simmering pianissimo
the violins violently tremolo
settling all together now
into a lightly paced run
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they do not slip upon the blood
that seeps from the deep etched cuts
along and underneath
their tightly wrapped feat
too gracious for folly are they
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held up by the intricate
web about the air
the delicate coiling sound of
artificial ether voices
that settles in the hair
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beneath their not faces
things are cracked and strange
time clicks away between the
internal rhythm of the
lungs heart brain
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the wires of their minds have
all been rearranged
the time has long since passed
when they could remember
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a time when they did not knit
seamlessly into each other
and bow and turn and smile
and pivot and partners change
or when their hearts did not screech
with the sharp rusty twang
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the speed picks up again
flutes trill like winter storms
horns rise in an unbroken stream
the clarinet wails a womans voice
in a guttural then breaking scream
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the dancers dance in tandem
lightly do their gloved hands meet
and smiling do they sympathize
with faces without lips or eyes
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- by E d i b l e F l o w e r |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: the Marionette
- Artist: E d i b l e F l o w e r
- Description: Concrits are muchly appreciated, and reviews are the love <3
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: marionette puppet orchestra music dolls
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Anhelitta De Celine-Val - 10/12/2009
- this is very good and descriptive...i like it!
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 02/23/2009
- AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/5
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- pom_pom_destruction - 11/30/2008
- i simpathhise that fact their feet would have to carry for such a long moment , it must have been a beautiful feeling to them because of their connection , but if that werent the case then i guess they would be in a complete pain
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/21/2008
- btw, any1 that needed to look up any of those words must be in like, 7th grade
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/21/2008
- impressive. you painted a marvelous picture. you officially receive the first 5 ive given to anyone in this arena. please stop by mine and tell me what you think. some of mine may be published so i want as much critisism as possible
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- reapersuns manfriend - 07/18/2008
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Gave me the goosebumps. *shivers*
Might I add that this is splendid writing, but the complex words might throw off everyone. I had to look up several, which isn't necessarily a bad thing unless it be judged by common-folk 12 year olds. I really enjoyed the piece though. 6/5. Oh crap, did Gaia have a glitch? DX - Report As Spam