Mercy

• Artist: Death-Shini
• Description: It's not one of me best!
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: mercy

The Faces shouting at me...
Nothing in their eyes can see..
The Pain their blows can do...
Never mercy or love from you..

The Lies you bring...
Nothing can make me scream..
The Tears of anger...
Beware of this deadly danger..

The Scars and burns...
Nothing in your face of turns..
The Words of hate...
Left me in an insane state..

Comments

[hot cherries101]

i like it but there was really no need to ryhme but it was still awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bug dreamer]

very good and lots of emotion!

[Minima96]

It's really good, but the words that ryme mess the beuty of the poem. It's good, but it could do without the ryming.