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There’s blood on the pavement
And the sound of sirens grows near
She looks on helplessly,
Overcome by fear
A scream full of anguish
And a cry of distress
Then wicked silence
But you know the rest
Breathing slows down
Rain pouring all around
Tears streaming from her eyes
Fall into pools of his blood
Now she leans over
And looks at his face
Peaceful in death
But never replaced
Gazing upon him
Bidding one last kiss
Savoring no other moment
But this
~~Alyss & Dani~~
- by kat_luvs_u |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Lost
- Artist: kat_luvs_u
- Description: A poem that me and my friend wrote in joint effort. The idea was mine and she helped put the words together. Thankies Dani!!! Just a poem about a girl losing the guy she loves in an accident. Please rate fairly. Comments and critique encouraged!!!
- Date: 07/18/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- member_of_the_FFA - 07/18/2008
- I read the poem before i read the description. I tell you it can have totally two different meanings. It is sad once you know what it is about. I thank you for sharing. I love the way you used your words.
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- xXSlowlyShatteringxX - 07/18/2008
- hehe <3'zz it XD GO MATES DUO!!!!! <33zz
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- kat_luvs_u - 07/18/2008
- Entirely Random Poem But I'm Proud Of It. Hope Everyone Likes It! Please Comment!!!
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