no room

• Artist: seven ate nine pizzas
• Description: I wrote this cuz i was surfing gaia and i started to day dream.Then this popped into my head
  oh and sorry for the nod face at the end i didn't want to put it there...it was a mistake
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: poems

sweet like an angel
your arms surround me
your body warm like the sun's rays
shining on my face
waiting for your arrival
all night...
nothing
I start feeling empty
...nothing inside me
It seems like a life time
passing by
then you come
with a figure by your side
her hair brown like chocolate
her face soft like a rose
flawless ...
tears poor over my checks like a river
my strength
completely crushed
you try to apologize
Do you think there is still a connection?
Do you think I still love you?
No...
there is no room for love
in this heart any longer 3nodding

Comments

[iiReina]

this is really cool!! ^^ i love the aura that it gives off.

[Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind]

I like it, but it flows oddly... Hmm. Maybe it's just me. 3/5

[Wowo_kin]

I like the poem. It's very sweet.