Darkness falls

• Artist: sakura is qween
• Description: sad it tells how are lifes are plz read and relize this is happening
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: dark

This world is filled with Darkness, greed , and selfisness .Darkness is everywere in this world .Violense is everywere now . What is there to do? There are only a few things to live for family , friends , and love . Love is hard to find now a days . Darkness falls as rain of complete sroww.This world will neaver change . The darkness now can not stop .

Comments

[ekitten614]

Very pessimistic... I don't like the paragraph format much, you could try writing it in stanzas? Many typos, you should look over them. Interesting though.