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My eyes are pricked
And my heart has
Been tricked
I wished for God to
Make it rain,
In the hopes that he
Would be nice enough
To wash away my pain,
But I know this
Hopeful wish won't come
True, for the
Wound is much too
Deep, and much too new...
- by maydaymouse |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: Deep
- Artist: maydaymouse
- Description: I don't know why I titled it "Deep" but I just made this poem because I was really hurt and want to get it out in anyway possible. I don't care if you don't like it just rate it comment it, do what you want.
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: deep heart wound
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Comments (3 Comments)
- peacekitten65 - 07/14/2009
- Nice. Stuff like that is hard to express for mmost people but you did a great job!
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- Sasori rocks puppetry - 07/08/2009
- The pain will go away with time i like the poem.
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- LotWPro - 03/30/2009
- Wow, that is actually really good. I realluy like it and I think your a very talented poet.
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