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Can they even see me?
They walk right by,
Without hearing my cries.
Can they feel me?
I reach out and try,
But my touch is unrecognized.
Going threw life,
Feeling as if I died.
A ghost lost in the ends of time.
But then I reached out,
And he took hold.
Pulled me back from the bitter cold.
But as I grew familiar to his loving embrace,
His sweet and kind, piercing gaze,
His lips that tasted of wine,
A touch as gentle as the breeze,
In his arms life felt so divine.
Little did I know it would end with this rhyme...
I should have seen it coming,
The end was oh so clear.
But now I am left standing here,
With nothing but my tears.
I some times think about that man,
That saved me long ago.
I wonder what he is doing right now,
And if he ever thinks of me,
I know I should just walk away...
But its not that easy you see.
I gave him my heart and all that is before thee,
But he tossed me aside,
To be a ghost in society again...
My heart had to die.
- by Pixel Nymph |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: Ghost in Society
- Artist: Pixel Nymph
- Description: Behind every poem is a reason for writing it. Well this one was brought on by the fact I am often not seen, ignored, or passed over. In school I came to be known as "The Ghost". Mainly because I could move threw the school and no one would even glance at me. I am use to not being heard which is why I took up poetry. This is my first ever entry into gaia though.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: ghost lost love alone broken
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Maryjustianna - 11/28/2008
- wow its wonderful! 5/5
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- -l- Chad Dia -l- - 11/28/2008
- =/ i gave it a 4 it could have been better
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- demon strait outta_hell - 11/28/2008
- It is great, I really liked it. I've never felt like a ghost because I've always made my self the center of attention.
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- Pixel Nymph - 11/28/2008
- ^_^ Wow so many kind comments. Thank you all so much, means alot to me since this is my first time putting my poetry up for judgement >w<
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- LexOnFyr - 11/28/2008
- thats so sad....*tear* it was beautiful....i love it...!
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- Lotterynote - 11/28/2008
- Very deep and poetic. It was beautiful in many ways. 5/5
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- Xagetta Blackthorn - 11/28/2008
- You allways did have a nack for poetry, and this one definatly hit home with me, let's just say I can relate. It deserves a 5 star for sure.
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