Loneliness

• Artist: OMGPanda x3
• Description: Well this is my first writing submition so be nice
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: lonleyness

I feel it everywere,
There is never enough to share,
No one can really relate,
It is a sad and disapointing state,
Its like I'm in a different world,
Population 1

Comments

[Lunarasea]

It's simple and sweet, and shows the feeling pretty well, but it seems....out of sync. You could give it a bit of work. For a first try, its really good.