My pain

• Artist: elizabethnaruto
• Description: This is sorta a song poem that i made cause i was sad
• Date: 07/12/2012
• Tags: pain

Can you see me do you even care can you hear my tears feel my pain as i sit alone in a dark room my heart is missing the pieces that everyone broke. Can you see the scars the battles scars on my body do you see the monster in my eyes. You made me that way do you see my dreams feel my nightmares or do you even care. Can you feel my pain Can you feel my sorrow or do you even care. Do you see the fear in my eyes do you know how much i cry or do you even care. feel the darkness closing in there is nothing i can do but let it engulf me.

Comments

[Sera Bryn]

you should have written it in verse form instead of prose, because it is much more difficult to read. also, the meter is undefined