where rain comes from up there

• Artist: XxAngel_LoverxxX
• Description: my family told me once it is true idk but in loving memory......
• Date: 05/16/2011
• Tags: where rain comes from there

once i wanted to kno where rain came from but my dad told me that rain came from the sky where the angels and gods cry above us.. but then i kept going to see who else in my family's opinion bout this. i asked one of my uncles he said it came from gods who pissed on us. then i was like huh.... i was 5 that time tho i didnt understand... but then i asked my grandpa he said also the gods and angels who always thinks bout us and crys and pisses are the rain he told me to shut up and so i did... then after 1 years later wen i was 6 years old i still didnt understnad but wen sumone died that time i had loving memory in everybody.... i mostly understood my dad wen he told me wen angels and gods cry for us. i believed that one beccause wen one of my family members past away in loving memory i would think one day wen it rains i think bout her crying for us above in heaven so in loving memory i would always never forget the time i heard this story. ^_^

Comments

[starstarstarrvidore]

Also for one year, you write "year". Sorry!

[starstarstarrvidore]

Um, did you even put it in spellcheck? Also Rule of Thumb: Numbers less than one-hundred are always written, never use the actual numbers. If you want to get a good five-star rating, use spellcheck and proper grammar. Also if you want it to be nice and heartwarming, I'd suggest a dearth of swearing. I know how hard it is to express peeing without giggles, but cussing is not the way to do it.

[blackrosett50]

i like it hun <3 5/5