Scary Story...

• Artist: HappyLime_x3
• Description: This is a story I made up my own, a scary story.
• Date: 12/15/2010
• Tags: funnyscary story

One windy night, there was a girl, she was walking alone in the dark windy night.She saw a haunted house, she knew there was ghosts inside it, so she walked in.''They'll see, i'm gonna prove it to them!''She said as she took out her camera.Then she heard the door closed, BANG! ''Wow, its freezing in here.''Said the girl shivering.Suddenly, she heard a knock on the door, knock! She opened the door, but nobody was outside...Then she heard a 2 knocks on the window, still no one.Then she said ''Ugh, what is this? Is this a game or what? Come out already, ghost, i'm not scared of you.''Said the girl impatiently.She heard 3 knocks on the wall, she walked towards it and...'"RAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!'''Came out a ghost.''AHHH!'' Screamed the girl as she fainted.Then, the ghost came and killed the girl, and thats how she dies...

Comments

[Oreo Stealer]

Sorry, not very exciting and you don't tell storys like, "Then she did this, then that,.."
In the first sentence, instead of, "One windy night, there was a girl, she was..." try something like, "Walking alone one cold windy evening was a young girl with dark flowing hair."
2/5 for the effort. =)