- I woke up in the middle of the night it was pich black i couldent eaven see a light .i yelled for help no one came i fell down and felt a shame i seen a lite so i looked that way my door spun open ther ther they lay!
- by butchro890 |
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- | Submitted on 06/22/2010 |
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- Title: THE CRAZY NIGHT
- Artist: butchro890
- Description: This happend when i was 8 years old long time ago
- Date: 06/22/2010
- Tags: scary night
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Comments (3 Comments)
- RP_Nerwen Falassion - 06/24/2011
- It's cute though.
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- RP_Nerwen Falassion - 06/24/2011
- run on sentences, grammatical errors, and spelling issues that create something that can barely be called a story isn't creative. This barely even has a plot. Just because you wrote it when you were eight doesn't mean you can fix the problems and add a little creativity.
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- iElder Danzo - 07/10/2010
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lol fail spelling and made up
when you were 8 "long time ago" you got your spelling like you were 6 get a life noob - Report As Spam
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