- The mother sat before the tomb of the little girl.she thought that the new house would change her daughters safty,but it didnt. Tears like dimonds ran down her face as she gets up.The poor mother has to see the sight of the dead child known as maybell.Two years before this had happend maybell was 3.As her father walked out on her and her mother,maybell was cursed with a gift,a gift so powerful that when the time was right,and she older she would be used as a weapon to destroy the world,the only way she could not destroy the world is if on her 5th birthday she were struck in the heart.The mother had no idea what to do,so as time went on maybell was 4 then 2 weeks before her birthday she had a spirit girl,otherwise known as the shadow demon had come to visit her.The mother had fully expected the demons visit,so she set maybell up so that when the demon to visit she would shoot her in the head,so as the demon was before maybell the mother had came up behind the demon,the demon realized the mothers precence and whipped around faster than a millasecond.......To be continued.
- by XxSweetThreatxX |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/29/2009 |
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- Title: spirit girl
- Artist: XxSweetThreatxX
- Description: Whatcha think? help me with a part 2 please.Comment me ideas :)
- Date: 08/29/2009
- Tags: spirit girl
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- bob199424 - 01/01/2010
- i like the demon conspect. it's a good base. i would change it a little. you gave out a lot of information in the story in that little bit. but it was good. i would work on it though. sounds cool.
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