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Hello my name is Ezzy.I'm just a boy that always lonely every time.Don't care
if it was day or night. But everything change when i met this girl.
As i was walking at the beach..I hit a girl unaccidently.
"Ah sorry miss.i don't see you." i said ."it's okay.no problem" she say to me.
The girl is so preetty.Additional she is wearing a swimsuit.Huh so sexy.
"Errr sorry miss for disturbing.can i know your name?"ask me.And she
answered"Mysty"."Ooh.your name is preetty like the name owner" i trying
to tackle her."
"thank you.how about you?"she asked."ME?my name is Ezzy.Nice to meet
you"."Oh sorry.i got to go now.bye"But without my guess,she kiss me.
Is this a reality or dream?i feel like i'm in heaven right now.But who is she?
why that she want to go home so fast?It's not sunset yet?Ermmm.
The next day i meet her again.And now she is at my favourite cafe.
"Hey Mysty,nice to meet you again!" I greet her."Hi dear."I'm weird why
she act like that.I'm never seen her before."Mysty,why you kiss me yesterday?"
"Did you mean like this?Muahhh"she kiss me again."you want to know why?
because i know that you always lonely right?so i'll acommpany you with my
kisses muahhh"."Is this a dream?" ask me."No dear.can you follow me?"
she asked."sure".I'm not understand why i at the church.additional there's
many people here.like that we will get married."wait here dear i want to go to
ladies"she say."ok".then when she came back,i see her with a gown."why you wear
the gown?"i ask."i want you to marry me to break my curse."she say."curse?
what curse?"i ask"i have mysterious curse.did you remember when we first meet?
i go home before sunset right.so the curse is i can go out when sunset is
coming and to break my curse i have to marry with the first man i kiss."she explain to
me."ooh..now i understand.ok i will marry you."i answered."thank you!!"
And after 2 years i got married with Mysty we got a twins!!i was so happy.
the baby boy we call 'Andrew' and the girl we call 'MYSTERY' heart
- by SyaSya_The BaD AnGel |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/21/2009 |
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- Title: mysterious curse.
- Artist: SyaSya_The BaD AnGel
- Description: i just do this just for fun but i don't know if the story is bad or good.so..pls comment.i will accept your comment.and pls rate it.thank you.
- Date: 08/21/2009
- Tags: creatures fell love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- 3Jumps - 12/22/2009
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This is so terrible that I actually enjoyed it.
Two questions:
Why did your protagonist, 'Ezzy' attempt to assault the female focus of this project- she did nothing wrong to him, yet in the first two paragraphs (I assume they would be paragraphs if you understood formatting) Ezzy both strikes AND tackles his bride to be.
Question 2) If Mysty is so desperate to break the curse, why do you torment her for two years rather than simply marry her at the ceremony prepared on the second day? - Report As Spam
- erika_merika98 - 08/21/2009
- GOOD STORY!!!!i love it(by your cousin)
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