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Once there was a girl, waking down a street on a rainy day. Then she stoped,, Then a bolt of lighting stuck right next to her and disappered. Now one saw her, exsept, for a little 6 year old girl looking through the window, starring at the stop she disappered
10 years later.
There was a girl named Sara Harasin. She was a nice girl that went to Sharitons High School. It was a public school. Then One Day...
""Hey Jenny!" Sara said. "Hi Sara!" Have you noticeed it hasent rained for about 2 weeks! Thats the best we ever had here!" Jenny said. "I know! It has been getting better over the years! I remember when I was just about 6 years old and it would rain almost everyday!" Sara Said. RRRRIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG! "NO! School!" Jenny said. "I know how you feel!" Sara said. Sara and Jenny both headed off for class!
RRRRRRRRRIIIIIIINNNNNNNGGGGGGG! " yay, School is over. O MY GOSH! LOOK OUT SIDE! ITS RAINING!" Jenny Says. "Now we have to walk home!" Sara says. Jenny started off for home as she yelled " SEE YOU TOMORROW!" "OK!" Sara Yelled. Sara headed off home.
Sara was just across the street from her house when a girl pasted by and Sara Thought she saw before. "Excuse me, do I know you?" Sara asked. The other girl stopped, turned to Sara. Sara knew who she was. It was the girl who disappered when she was looking out the window when she was six. "Oh, sorry, I..." Before Sara could finish The girl grabbed Saras hand and Lighting struck, and they where gone.
2 seconds they appered about two feet away from where they where. "DARN IT!" The girl yelled. She waved her hand in the sky and the sun came out. "Sorry about that.!" The girl said. "Uh... I don`t mean to be rude but, who are you?" Sara Asked. "YOU!" THE GIRLED SAID!
TO BE CONTINUDIED!
- Title: THE GIRL!
- Artist: bodyache
- Description: Scary at the begining, but gets funny, THEN AWESOME!
- Date: 08/13/2009
- Tags: girl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- bodyache - 08/14/2009
- Sorry people, I was tierd when I wrote it! t was lke 1 in the mornng so t snt that good!
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- l Emily l - 08/14/2009
- It's kind of too quick..the story is going faster than it should be.
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- Keenan-chan - 08/14/2009
- this IS interesting. if ya added more dets and maybe less.... !!! then it would be really good. pretty mysterious...
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- Xenarra - 08/14/2009
- hey this is interesting!! I'd like to read some more...but the bad side of this is that it all just seems too....hyped up..and perky..you know all quick and stuff..i mean there is supposed to be more description
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