- Once upon a time there was a girl who was so happy all the time. She always got everything she wanted. Her sister was so nice and they were like best friends. Then about when she was like 9 years old... things changed. At school people started being mean to her cause she was not good enough for anyone. People made fun of her and laughed cause they didnt understand that she was just different. Her sister started being mean to her cause she got older and she thinks shes so cool, but she is not. Her parents were not so nice to her anymore for some reason and she just thought it was because they didnt like her. Then suddenly her heart started hurting. Nobody cared what she said and each day her heart started hurting more but still no one cared. She spends the whole day after school seceretly crying so she doesnt get in trouble by her parents. She listened to sad songs while she cried for some reason and then she started drawing broken hearts cause her heart hurted. She got slapped many time and she cried. Not cause it hurted from the outside, it just hurt her on the inside.She tells her sister and parents to be nice to her but they seem to ignore what she says cause they still dont be nice to her. Whe she was 10 she started making some friends but she lost them cause they started acting cool. She never wanted to be cool she just wanted to be loved. No one could really tell that she was always sad cause she had to pretend that she was not and she did a good job cause people fall for it. She cuts herself cause she never in pain on the outside only on the inside. When she cuts herself she thinks about what she did wrong to be treated like this. The first time she cut herself she realized that she had a broken heart cause she was missing one important thing... and that was love. She always prayed in her mind when she cried that she would get some love or.... die. She didnt want to live like this but she did and is waiting to die some day soon or be loved. She just wanted atleast one person to care about her and to show that they did. her parents told her they loved her but it didnt seem like it. She was only living like this cause she new that some day she would be loved and kept waiting cause she beleived that out there their was someone who loves her. So she kept waiting and waiting but nothing ever happend, things just got worse. People started calling her emo and goth girl cause she wore black most of the time cause she was sad and cause it was her favorite color. So she planed when she was older to move out and go far away if no one loves her by then. She wants everyone to know that if anyone ever feels sad their not the only ones, and just because you dont get what you want dont be upset about it cause when she was 9 she never got anything she wanted only her sister did but sometimes she got small presants like a video game or a CD. From this day on she waits to be loved and not have a broken heart or die cause she doesnt want to live this life.
- by The Fallen Tragedy |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/15/2009 |
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- Title: Broken Heart!
- Artist: The Fallen Tragedy
- Description: This is a true story and i want to tell you who its about but its... personal and it makes me feel awkward to tell oyu who this life was about but if you know who its about, i hope you treat her better or she will die with pain!!!
- Date: 05/15/2009
- Tags: broken heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- XxGhetto_QueenxX - 11/07/2009
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Aww how sad
If you know that girl tell her I care and I will never hate her. Tell her I will treat her with respect if I ever see her. But if I ever meet her I know we would be great friends no matter what ^-^ But she should be happy she's different. I am and I'm happy. You telling this Makes her sound Independent. heart Don't forget to tell her everything I told you tell her I really do CARE heart - Report As Spam
- MandaPanda15 - 08/18/2009
- ur story is very real, i can relate to this somewhat tho, i like it =]
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- Captain Christine-Daae - 06/12/2009
- That's so sad... I feel bad for that girl. Do you know her? If you do, can you tell her that I care?
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- dragonfire2442 - 05/15/2009
- wow. that's emo. nicely done. heart
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