Jason

• Artist: OMG-ipod-OMG
• Description: DO NOT OPEN IF YOU SCARE EASILY
• Date: 02/16/2009
• Tags: laugh dark

One cold night in Crastal River a young boy named Jason was walking by a cow pond.When he walked to the edge of the pond he saw a glowing light.As he ewed and awwed at the sight he fell in the water screming bloody murder Jason sank to the bottum and couldnt swim back up to the top.He died and then he walkied back to the top glaring evily at the empty strets twisted
Soon a cop came down the street doing his normal street watch wahmbulance Then the cop saw a kids body Then he got out of the car and yelled to Jason "Hey kid you better get hme." Then Jasongot angery and pulled the cop in the pond and killed him.So every sunday or rainy night never go down Jason Street.As long as you dont see glowing green eyes

Comments

[Savior_ofunsafespirits]

And the emoticons are kinda dorky.

[Savior_ofunsafespirits]

Bad grammar... lots, and it's WAY too fast-paced. It's not that scary because it sounds more like a spam email than a writing arena story. Sorry.
But you did have a pretty good ending.

[trippybaby]

kinda dumb..

[OMG-ipod-OMG]

ok peeps thnx fer the advice! will do next time!
hey ppl i dont use this account anymore and i have an actuel scary story on it it is Xxdozen_of_black_rosesxX cheack it out plz biggrin

[xXxCaRaMeLlOxXx]

i realy dont c how that is scary like its cinda lame no ofense dude!

[Rainbowy Soul]

it's kinda... not scary... good base though... needs blood, more ppl and a lot more story... oh, and check ur grammar cua it's kinda bad... no ofense

[Ms Disdain]

Check your spelling, grammer and the way it reads. Other than that it's an alright base for a scary story biggrin Needs far more blood though!