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My Arms wrapped in the body of my lover,
I could not let him leave and I could not let him die.
Destiny says right , but it seems so wrong.
My lover shivers as the cold pain strucks his heart
"Please don't go" I kept whispering to myself,
for i had not tell him how i felt about him.
I could see his tears reflecting the moon which shined on us.
My lover knew it was the end so he tried to hold back the tears,
But it made me feel worse.
This accursed destiny will not prevail over me,
I will fight this dreached curse....
Then , right then, blue,glowing masses flew away from my lover.
My eyes could not bear this,
For i knew he was starting to disappear.
I kept yelling " NO , DON'T!!!"
but i felt useless.
It was too late, i had lost the match
So as my last resort, i leaned over to his shivering face
My lips pulled out ready to kiss him for the last time.
Before i could even touch him, he vanished.
My head bowed down to the floor as if i was dead.
"He's not coming back, This has to be just a dream"
- by Crystal_H3art |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: Disappearing Love
- Artist: Crystal_H3art
- Description: Thiz is about a part of my new anime that im making and hoping to publish called "Lupse"..This scene is where one character,Lauran, starts to lose her love one after a battle with another Lupse( A supernatural warrior with powers) So whenever someone defeats or kill a Lupse's Pet, then either the loved one of that person dies or the lupse does......enjoy ^_^ and commment plz
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: disappearing love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- RosarioAstrid666 - 08/28/2010
- wow so dramatic but it was very touch this will be good to publish
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- Nana Shinu Ai - 08/04/2010
- love it very dramatic and romantic and sad. keep up with the good work. make a continue sequel of them meeting again.
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- i saw you in my sleep - 06/29/2010
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Dramatic smile
And very nice, you'd be a talented anime writerr. - Report As Spam
- smeXxii---tEEn - 07/06/2009
- I love it. it really is a good story you should make a sequel were they like meet again!
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- Dandelion Childe - 06/20/2009
- this should be a chapter book razz
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- abby712 - 02/02/2009
- Intersting but the other lover shouldnt die meerily fade then come back and live till the end
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