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A Yunger Cuple, whit some years from been married, but they havent get the chance to have a baby. For not feeling so lonley, they bought a puppy and raise it as their child.
The Puppy grow big and healthy. For many times the dog save the couple from thieves, always loved and he love both of them.
Anyway, after seven long years, finaly, the couple had a baby!, they were so happy whit the new baby thay stard to forgot about the dog... This one stard to be kinda jealous about the baby, and the couple notice that...it wasnt the loyal, kind dog they got from seven years past.
One Day the couple leave the baby on his cradle and went to the roof for a BBQ. But What a surprice wend later then they saw the dog comming out from the baby's room, and blood on his snout, waging his tail happy.
The man whit out thinking twice guees the wrost and whit a shot from his shotgun, kill the dog. While This, the woman runs to the baby crudle, and found him, alive.. but near the crudle was a serpent dead, whit a bite on the head.
How Many Time we continue doing things whit out thinking twice?
Sometime we gonna stop condemned other earlier earlier whit out knowing?
Do we think before hurt someone nee?
- by Okami Ocean |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Dog and The Feelings
- Artist: Okami Ocean
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Description:
Here it's a Little Story about how Stupid we can become, Peopl Don¡t Think, or simple don't have feelings, maybe they forget about them, while the time pass ¬¬
It's kinda Sad thinking about it ne...
Other Thing.. Excuse me! if i have errors nei ne n.nU really
Hugs! far ya every boddy! please Rate o.o <33<33
n.n Take Care - Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: animal humans people feelings death
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Okami Ocean - 11/28/2010
- yup it is a true story. sadly...
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- Moonlit_Flowers - 11/28/2010
- is this a true story?!
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- Klaora - 06/25/2009
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It was really confusing at first, but I have several friends whose first language isn't English, so it made it a little easier. For that, you are forgiven for your errors. :3 I can't expect you to know EVERYTHING about the language when it is not your first.
This story is lovely, and very sad. It reminds me of Aesop's Fables.
Just one thing. :3 This belongs in the Fiction section, not the non-fiction.
Please keep working on your writing. It is great work. - Report As Spam
- Arcane-PH - 11/30/2008
- it's very true...acting without thinking is bad in SOME situations, while thinkung without acting is bad in other situations...you must deliberate what to do in each
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- -Kaizo-Knight - 11/29/2008
- well that was kinda a Hit on the face.. but's true ..
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