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ARTEMIS QUICKSILVER
She was so embarrased! Her! Having to be rescued! her! The one who had kicked the princes rear hundreds of times! And she had landed in Roniliars arms! How could this day go any worse?!? Artemis kept running, Stoping only to check behind her. Soon, she reached the Dragon's Rock, Home of the ancient dragons before the prince got them. She assumed the Wyvern and Wind Dragon's she had frees would be here, due to their instincts telling them they belonged there and that it was safe. Artemis knew the nests were higher up, and that she would have to scale the rocks. She had visited this place many times, just sitting on the rocks and looking out at the village. This time she was moving in. "well," she said grimly, "looks like I'm home!". She started climbing. The coarse, rough stone cut and callused and scared her hands, and her tattered dress tore. With a final heave, she pulled herself to the top and flopped, breathless, onto the cool, smooth stones of the nest. Worn down from millions of dragons walking on it years ago."i cant believe i made it," she gasped, clutching the stitch in her side. Footsteps padded her way. SHe looked up, and saw the wyvern padding her way.It bent down it's hean and nuzzled her affectionately, and used a wing to help her up. Using the wing as a support, she followed it to a cave. The wind dragons, thin and sleek, were snuggled up on the floor at the back of the cave. Discarded, shed, black and green dragon skins lied on the ground. SHe could use them as clothing, and live scales as tools.Dead, shed skins were leathery, but live, fresh, single scales were sharp and glimmering. The moment she entered the cave, one of the wind dragons looked up, blinking sleepily. It saw her, and screeched excitedly. The others woke and crowded around her, licking, nussling, and nudging her. "i missed you too!" she laughed, translating into dragontounge. Suddenly, she felt nauseous, and her vision swam before her. Then, she blacked out.
PRINCE AGRAVIUS
"ARRGH!" he screamed, his vision red with anger. That stupid elf got away again! his best men were dead, shot in the back! His dragons gone!Now what was he to do!?! those elves had destroyed order in his life! He knew what to do. He had to wipe them out. But how?
- by Shining Soul Forever |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/28/2008 |
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- Title: ElfBane, Chapter 4
- Artist: Shining Soul Forever
- Description: PLZ read chapter one, two, and three before this one!
- Date: 10/28/2008
- Tags: elfbane chapter
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Minou-Minxx18 - 10/29/2008
- It's very good. I like the story line! Advice wise I'd say loook carefully at your tenses and how you structure your sentences. That will make it easier to follow. But go for it!!!
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- RiikoxSoushi - 10/28/2008
- I actulley have a short story in my jornal...if you would like to read it...
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- RiikoxSoushi - 10/28/2008
- Could you write me when you put chp. 5 out plz.
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- RiikoxSoushi - 10/28/2008
- OMG! This is amazing! I luv it! I just..wow..all I have to say..wow.
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