your downfall

• Artist: Sabin101
• Description: its not really complete but I would like everybodys opinions on it.
• Date: 10/07/2008
• Tags: bliss

Hi how are you? I can’t wait to see you. You should know who the real me is. The real me is an villain an venomous enemy whose whole intentions is to leave you feeling down to leave you writhing in agony. After the short period of bliss that I give you sadness haunts you. You twitch and itch feigning for me. Until eventually you go out and once again find me. You hold my white powdery body in your hands and just like that your nose eats me up. You feel that burning sensation that comes then that few minutes of bliss come yet again. And eventually that happiness goes away and you yet again go out looking for me.

Comments

[deadley_blood]

i kinda like it, its kinda a stupid and a waist of time, if u put it in poetry, then its gunna be OK,...i guess

[FU ir Master Sun]

so far the most interesting thing i've read. i want MORE!!!!!! plz write the last of it... plz

[xo-cute-hearts-xo]

You are a great writer! You could have a good career as a non fiction novelist! Good luck to you!