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i look to the sky
a single tear rolls down my eye
how many times have i told u i luv u
how many times ahve u told me goodbye..
remember the dawn...for it soon breaks..
ur thighs they caused earthquakes..
i miss u so much but u never wanted me
i look thru my window and think how could it be
i listen to slipknot and fly around the room
i was to be the bride and u would be the groom
so plz dont say nothing at all
i have one final chance to be with u
there is one thing that u can do
take me away
and
u bring the mustard...
- Title: u bring the mustard...
- Artist: rat goof
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Description:
this poem is written out of luv :heart:
every body has expearianced love it is for all who have loved
and ever will love
my one true love and i have had a hrd realationship this is how it made me feel
hotdogs with mustard was he favorite food that is the connection - Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: love mustard slipknot
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Acid Frenzy - 12/23/2008
- It belongs in poetry. The spelling is akin to a ten-year-old who has just learned about the internet. The poem falls flat in the end. It means nothing, and the silliness destroyed any kind of depth or meaning it might have offered before the last three lines. Which wasn't much.
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- Angielaa - 12/16/2008
- Nice. biggrin
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- Slashermills2 - 07/29/2008
- please learn to spell
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- disgusting - 07/24/2008
- it has the edge of a mature adult sharing thier feelings but then there are the hints of childish depression in there great work
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- inktvis - 07/24/2008
- bravo
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- disgusting - 07/24/2008
- Awesome
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- starcus - 07/22/2008
- omg... so beautiful omg ..
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