- Love: It's like if I told you that people want to find love... but only love can find you... a lover will have pain in his soul... no one understands how to truely love... and love is a parasite... Death brings love... but love brings hate... hate brings violence... and violence brings death... a vicious cycle of torment... This parasite can be killed... by misunderstanding.. denial.. and sadness... Love is brought on by others... and if you love... truely love... you will be infected... cursed with the pain of wanting...
- by Generic Individual |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Love?
- Artist: Generic Individual
- Description: A description of love.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXDeadAssassinXx - 07/20/2009
- preaty good. good description
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- MightyJozan - 02/10/2009
- pretty cool description i would say
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- King Exseada - 12/12/2008
- cool i sorta sang it. it would make a nice song.
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- ULTRaRaWRx - 11/22/2008
- I thought it were goood.... D: lol. ^_^
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- Generic Individual - 07/17/2008
- It's like this for it's mood. So screw you. Don't shove grammar down my throat. How about reading my other pieces and see?
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- IconicRaven - 07/16/2008
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From one writer to another:
Learn proper grammar and how to format a piece. It has a great jumping off-point but the points made for the case of love being a parasite aren't very well supported and therefore the piece overall suffers. Work on that and come back. 3/5.
I did enjoy the cynicism though, I admit. biggrin - Report As Spam
- kitty_melissa - 07/16/2008
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love is a good thing. u it sound bad. i love all my friends but that doesnt bring any sadness.
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