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Breach
Rough Draft
Josiah M. Grey
Prologue:
Celestian History
Many several of life forms have believed the universe to be born in almost an infinite amount of ways. Have they been correct once, maybe they would understand that the planet that the life forms live upon is a life form all on its own? Although the thoughts of such things have been considered ludicrous by almost all life forms. Only the wisest of various life forms had understood the mind staggering truth of that they have never been alone. Since the beginning of time the first life was before it had all started… but only from that universe. All other thoughts of religion and science, holds the real truth of how that the so-called universe but was one of many. Homo sapiens have been close to the truth plenty of times but the entire planet of Tellus have they been the most bias of life forms in that one single universe. Only a few of human minds were the most interesting of all the others. Albert Einstein was one of the many interesting minds of which the universe had almost been completely revealed. If Einstein had been alive for ten more years later maybe the truth would have been exposed to the truth of their existence. Many other life forms could know the mind staggering truth of their existence. But none do. Not even the beginning knows. The truth is that there used to be absolutely nothing in the dark void. A very deep and dark rabbit hole but believed to have no light at the end. No stars, no planets, no galactic bodies of gas and dust, and no life. Except for one life however… In the vast reaches of the empty void was a single atom. This atom was one of the most powerful of all its brethren. A regular life form would not believe to have suspected that an insignificant atom could live but in all things it can! The lone atom had every single type of energy, matter, and compounds deeply compressed into a very powerful singularity. The atom was the first atom but also another life form. The atom had also a name. But the name is not what importance the event that was going to take place was what was going to be spectacular. The atom had finally completed its first duty in what it was created to perform and made the most destructive and beautiful explosion of all time. The first effect was the light of gases dancing elegantly lights a computerized abstract light. The lit up gases were not harmless nevertheless. In the eye-catching gases was the most powerful acid any life form could ever fear. The gas was acidic enough to eat away itself and that was what became of the beautiful deadly gas. The next effect after the light show, the atom broke its first seal. The red neutrons that circled the atom burst into flames and spreading out all the elements and not as dearly destructive gases over more than trillions of light years in diameter. The atom had then broken its second seal and the black neutrons released. The phenomena of dark matter and dark energy had begun to take effect almost immediately. The dark matter had begun to compress the element of some of the elements that seemed most appropriate to create. Within seconds the stars were beginning to form. The atom then broke its final seal and the multi-colored neutrons broke and the magnificence of light would make one believe that it was unexplainable. Five life forms have taken shape into which the empty life force of the atom was destroyed. The second life forms had taken a life form like body of a soon to be created Homo sapiens. Three of the life forms had taken the male form while the two other life forms have taken the female body shape. Thus was the new creation of difference. The life forms had decided to call the difference Sex. The word Sex had been used for many different ways and used in innuendos that the Homo sapiens of Tellus had used quite often. The life forms that stood in the baby universe were standing side by side. All the sharing the same height of six feet, the same exact weight of over one billion tons, and they shared the same design of the eyes of which the iris was in the shape of three connected rhombuses, each touching by just the tip in a triangle formation, and the pupil had been clean flat gold. The one life form in the far left had a very pale skin and was very scrawny for such a heavy being, he had hair and his expression held it like he were always insane, the skin of his body looked like it were a pale white leather clinging for dear life on his bones, he had been named Shinu, God of death. The second left life form had a gray colored skin and had has perfect body slim and slender body, her expression was sweet and was presumed innocent, she had long multi-colored hair that went down to her waist, she had been named Kanjou, God of emotion. The middle life form that had been the most robust of them all had gold skin that had glowed intensely over all of the stars of the one universe. The gold being was very different from the others from having a body. The being had several arms. It had no hair, eyes, ears, nose, or legs. The gold being had half of its body very serpent like and the tail itself was grand of all. A gold rotating circle over twenty-four inches in diameter was around the waist of the being’s body. The being’s hands had talons and had retractable claws that looked as if they were made out of pure plasma. The gold serpent being had been one of the most unusual but most of all the most feared. Over the trillions of years this single being became the ultimate ruler of all of the multi-verse. The name of this fearful being was named Rei God of the Underworld.
- by Official Shr3D |
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- | Submitted on 12/25/2010 |
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- Title: Breach (Rough Draft Preview
- Artist: Official Shr3D
- Description: Belongs to me Josiah M. Grey. I'm a writer. I have a very open mind about pretty much everything and I feel like I need to have it in a book. But in a sense of which it might anger people... I have ways of thoughts of how life would might have begun or how the universe came to be but first i'll give you the rough draft... if you're strongly religious then this is not for you. But this is just fiction. But please enjoy. Revisers in the Gaia writing precincts, if you have suggestions PM me.
- Date: 12/25/2010
- Tags: breach rough draft preview
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Handske - 02/15/2011
- I agree with Altair down there. It'd help a LOT if that giant block of text was broken up a little.
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- Official Shr3D - 12/26/2010
- Ah thank you. I knew it felt wrong. I was having trouble because I have to make the narration sound wise and all knowing but also kind of like how a grandpa would tell a story make it sound very meaning.
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- Altair Starlight - 12/26/2010
- Good start on ideas, could use some help with formatting. You might also want to think of other ways to refer to "life forms". It seemed a bit repetitive to use those two words, over and over.
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