- Young Paku travels to the capital of Degteria set on the shore of the Jogna nation an ally of Paku's invaded nation of Gretaria. There he meets a traveler named Foreman, he states he is on the way to Cratuvia the enemy capital to the north. He says, "I'll give you a ride if you bring me five gold longs." So then he goes and looks to find the five gold longs, on his way he finds Deviria the General of the Cratuvian capital army. He attacks Paku in a battle of swords and strength. But strategy is what wins, as Paku demonstrates... he climbs up a tree knocks a branch and tackles Deviria out-cold.After a few more hours Paku finds the five gold longs and journeys across the sea on a whale-boat.They are so close from reaching the nation of Isravia until invaders attack the boat in which Paku is traveling on, in a valient effort Paku fights off the invaders and feels proud until he finds out what had happened to the captain. He was stabbed multiple times and then bled to his demise.Paku swore to get revenge.He rode the boat to an island for supplies. There the island was took over by the Israviens. He manages to lay low and then a sudden flash.......the islanders were fighting back. Paku tries to fight them too but later gets captured by the enemy.In their ships he sees the other captured one and sees the girl he loved before the invasion. They talked and later Paku finds out his family is at the capital. But it was too late the end of days had begun. As they travel to the capital they see raids of ships then overthrow the captain of the ship. They race towards the capital then Paku faces the king face-to-face.Then Paku is stabbed. He is nearly bleeding to death, then out of nowhere his father shoots an arrow at the king and ends it all. Paku dies before he can see the peace brought upon him, but he is a hero to all that seeked peace among this world. smile
- by JonConPadre |
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- | Submitted on 08/27/2010 |
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- Title: The End of Days
- Artist: JonConPadre
- Description: This story focuses on a young teen who watches his loved ones get killed during an invasion of their town. He survives but then embarks on a journey to the enemies' capital to stop the war caused by the invasion before, the end of days.
- Date: 08/27/2010
- Tags: hero battle raid attack
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