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He was my best friend
and I was his
Laughing, hugging, and all but one
Kissing
I dreamt of kissing you
you were the one for me
I loved how you laughed and played with my hair
Dreaming of the day YOU would kiss me
After playing and after crying at your feet
you had to move
I said "I Love You"
I screamed "I Love You"
I bent down and kissed me
He said "I love you to"
I hugged him and kissed him until he left.
Crying for him not to leave
He turned around 26 miles away from the place he was going
I was still in his driveway.
When he got there he kissed me
and said goodbye my love. heart redface
- by DangTay -x |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/14/2010 |
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- Title: A little to much:(
- Artist: DangTay -x
- Description: Love is a battlefield, Win it in a Kiss!
- Date: 07/14/2010
- Tags: little much
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Ave Machina - 07/21/2010
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The first letter of the second line of the third stanza is not capitalized.
And the And the first line of the seventh stanza looks like it could have a typing error.
Other than that it all looks good. At least to me. - Report As Spam