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Taken Ch. 1
Chapter 1
"Meeting"
It was an icy moonless night; I walked down the side walk rubbing
my hand together to warm them. I pass a dark alley. I notice two
Figures in a struggle, I stop to watch behind the corner. I see one of
them is a girl and the other is a man.
The man grabs the girl and grabs her head and yanks it two the side.
To me it looks like kiss on her neck. The girl then falls limp in his
arms, He drops her on the ground. I run into the alley and yell.
"What did you do to that girl?"
He glances over to me and starts to walk over to me. By that time I
start to rethink going in to the alley. I stepped backward. I trip over
a pipe on the ground. Before I could get back up to run he was on
me, Lifting me up and twisting my arm with on hand with the other
he grabbed my hair and yanked my head backwards reveling my
Bare neck.
He smiled reveling sharp teeth dripping with the blood
on the girl and saliva. He then starts to draw his fangs close to my
neck.
"Please Don't I beg you don't kill me please I
won't tell anyone I promise"
I yelped. He stopped, He drew back and laughs.
"I won't yet, I have had my fill this evening" he said
Whale letting go of my hair.
"Huh, what do you mean not yet?" I asked
"I can't just let you go, now can I?" he said gazing in to my eyes.
"But I won't tel… " I said as my eye lids start to get heavy.
I fall asleep.
- by Farbe-of-Time |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/31/2010 |
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- Title: Taken ch 1
- Artist: Farbe-of-Time
- Description: just a story I am writing
- Date: 05/31/2010
- Tags: takenvampierstory
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Comments (2 Comments)
- [Shiro Petto] - 06/13/2010
- Lost interest because it has a vampire but I liked it smile
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- beautiful-crystalrainbow - 06/06/2010
- It has the making of a very good story! Keep working on it.
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