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Every single person in the world has that one person.
The one person who truly understands them.
Who knows when you reach your limits.
Who has gone through the same pains you have.
As my life passed by, I saw everyone, my friends... family... find that one person.
Until there was only me. And her.
Every single person in the world has that one person.
But I do not.
I search.
But come back fruitless.
She stays by my side.
Though I know in my heart, she has already found that one person.
She looks at me with what looks like pity.
I hated her for that.
Every single person in the world has that one person.
I died without finding mine.
Every single person in the world has that one person.
As I looked in to her eyes,
And took my last breath,
I knew,
That she was the one person all along.
The eyes that looked at me,
That I thought was full of pity,
Were filled with love.
Every single person in the world has that one person.
I failed to acknowledge mine.
- by Second Year Ace Rikkai |
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- | Submitted on 05/21/2010 |
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- Title: That One Person
- Artist: Second Year Ace Rikkai
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I don't like it. TT -TT
It's really angsty but it's kinda rushed cuz it was a spur-of-the-moment type of thing. Or an epiphany. ( my la teacher would be so proud! ) Any ways comments or critics (?) will be great!
i didn't know what category to put it in so here it is. - Date: 05/21/2010
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The Butterfly Shadows - 08/29/2010
- wow...I really liked this a lot. It was really deep and true, im sure a lot of people agree. Great job
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- Demon At Midnight - 06/17/2010
- You are such an amazing poet, and you should think greater of yourself. I love everything you write!
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- Anadalya - 05/21/2010
- Again, so sad. Yet deep and beautiful. I believe I have found that one, only the future will tell. But to those who have not, I give you my deepest respects. And wish you luck.
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- Second Year Ace Rikkai - 05/21/2010
- Awww... Thanks.... :0 >.<
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- angelmiah96 - 05/21/2010
- i thot it was good and u r rite everyone trys to find that one person
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