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okay this is my 3nd story...**THIS MEANS THOUGHT OR POV** [THIS MEANS ACTIONS] <THIS MEANS SETTING> well here it is! hope you enjoy, comment&&rate high!!!
Characters: Alyssa, Cole, Justin, Maddie, Pattie[justin's mom], Jane[riley's mom], chaz, riley, alexis, && ryan
~~~~~~STORY~~~~
JUSTIN- **just friends?**
RILEY- soooo what now?
JUSTIN- ri, i have to tell you somethin
RILEY- okay....
JUSTIN- when i asked if you liked me i meant do you LiKE me...because i kinda really like you....
RILEY- really?! [smiles a little] **i have liked you for a long time justin! i missed you sooooo much this is like a dream come true! i cant believe you like me too**
JUSTIN- yeah [smiles] so...um do you?
RILEY- [still smiling] yeah, i do...a lot.
JUSTIN- what happens now?
RILEY- [kisses his cheek] its getting late, i should get home
JUSTIN-[smiles at her] wow...oh yeah i guess youre right
<ON RILEY'S FRONT PORCH>
RILEY- so how long are you staying here?
JUSTIN- all week
RILEY- so then will i see you tomorrow?
JUSTIN- yeah
RILEY- cool [smiles]
JUSTIN- **okay, i have no idea what to do now. like do i kiss her? do i hug her? or do i just say goodbye and leave? i'll go with the second one** well ummmm bye [hugs her]
RILEY- [hugs him back] bye. [goes inside]
JUSTIN- [gets into the car]
<at the hotel>
PATTIE- so how was your date???
JUSTIN- mom....
PATTIE- fine, how was the movie?
JUSTIN- good
PATTIE- did you have fun with riley?
JUSTIN- yeah, she hasnt changed at all
PATTIE- thats nice. well im going to bed...don't stay up too late...
JUSTIN- i wont...
PATTIE- okay...[goes to the next room]
JUSTIN- **i think i love riley...i mean i did before i left but now, i REALLY love her**
~~~thats it for today....give suggestions if you have any!!! leave em in the comments <3 <3 <3 ~~~
- by YourBabiiXX |
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- | Submitted on 02/10/2010 |
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- Title: chapter 3: i like you
- Artist: YourBabiiXX
- Description: comment&&rate!! okay i need suggestions sooooo if yall have any write them as comments :) <3 <3 <3
- Date: 02/10/2010
- Tags: chapter2 justinbieber justin bieber dancebabyy22
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- Blades_VS_Guns - 02/20/2010
- Try wriring in story form as it is easier to understand and has more vocabulary. Anyway, it is nice! Oh yea pls rate mine too I'm not sure of it yet
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