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Chapter 4 of The Void
In the hospital.....
Annelise awoke feeling groggy and only seeing a blur of white colors. She couldn't remember where she was or why she was here. Wait. Where's the Void? She thought to herself as she started getting scared. Was it playing some kind of nasty trick on her? Letting her take over only to quickly take it away from her? She felt something warm touch her hand and she gasped. She looked down at her hand and followed the arm up to the owner of the hand that had scared her. Riley... Riley didn't look too well. He actually looked worried sick. "Why the heck did you try to kill yourself,Annelise?"He asked with alarm and anger. It was a weird combination on a voice that used to speak to her with so much love and comfort. She must of shown her confusion on her face because Riley suddenly softened. His eyes that had been burning with anger just a moment ago were now shining with what seemed like tears. He cupped her cheek with a warm hand and his thumb stroked her cheekbone softly. "You must of drank so much that you can't remember. You tried to kill yourself,Annelise and you were pretty damn close but we stopped you from dying,"He said and kissed her forehead with his soft lips. Annelise shook and started sobbing. She didn't remember it at all. She didn't remember the drinking or the trying to kill herself. All she remembered were a blur of many colors and images that left too soon for her to decipher what they meant. "Why?"Her voice cracked out,her throat seemed as if she had been screaming for a long time. "Why what?"Riley asked now confused. Had his face always been so readible or had she spent too much time watching the Void read people? "Why did you stop me?"She asked and quickly took a drink of water from a glass near her hoping it would help her aching throat. "Why did we stop you from what?"Riley asked even though on his face it seemed he knew exactly what she had meant. "Why did you stop me from dying?"She asked and his breath went in in a loud gasp as his hand gripped hers tightly. She wasn't crying anymore. She was serious. Why had they brought her back? Didn't they know her only wish was to die?
Chapter 1: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101952141#title
Chapter 2: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101968949#title#title
Chapter 3: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101969957#title#title
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- Title: The Void Chapter 4
- Artist: breathing_is_not_allowed
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Chapter 4 of The Void. I've decided that every other chapter will be a flashback. In this one you see Annelise in the hospital,but where is the Void? I want to give a thanks to my two readers that I know of: xXAlice RockzXx and niallmcfc. Comment and rate. :]
- Date: 02/04/2010
- Tags: void chapter annelise riley void
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Ever963 - 03/04/2010
- You have a new reader! Sorry i haven't gotten around to commenting because everytime i started to read the chapers my mom booted me off the computer. Love all the chapters so far can't wait to read more
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- breathing_is_not_allowed - 02/15/2010
- Thanks for telling me what you truly thought,lordlock. smile
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- the posiden - 02/15/2010
- sucks
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- breathing_is_not_allowed - 02/08/2010
- http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101984187#title Chapter 5 smile And you should post some stories. It would be really cool. Thanks for the comment. smile
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- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 02/05/2010
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I might actually start posting some stories soon wink Too much time on my hands...
I do find it interesting how instead of taking them as the same people you've made them separate (her and The Void)... next flashback, maybe her and Riley or something, not much actual info on her at the moment.
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