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“Mother Nature’s Daughter”
(introductory)
A long, stretched corridor; No one seen inside.
Blood pounding in my ear, gun in hand.
Blood everywhere; dripping from body’s of the dead, and from the walls in which they laid.
I looked to my left, A survivor.
I brought up my gun, and as I was about to shoot she cried out ,”Please, No, Please!”.
“To late.” I thought to myself as the gun fired , “no one must no my secret.”.
The brisk wind picked up pace as her body hit the floor.
Blood dripped from her wound as she laid immobilized on the cold wooden flooring.
I kicked her body out of my way, and ran threw the corridor. Finding my way threw this Hospital was like trying to find my way out of a metal box; I can’t.
I fell on my knees, exhaustion spreading threw my veins.
As darkness descended on me I heard a faint voice,
“You can trust me, Maddie.”.
(Chapter 1)
The child put the unconscious body on her lap, and gently stroked it’s hair, “there ,there” she whispered as though she herself was it‘s mother, “It’s alright, this has happened to most of us.”. The child then moved her arm in random looking motions, which then became a pattern -Swish, Flick, Left ,Right- while she ,at the same time, brought her hand upwards.
Then the wind, steadily, began to pick up pace. It began to circle the child and the unconscious body, soon creating a barrier of wind, dividing the child and the rest of the world. Suddenly the child, in a louder clearer voice then before, said “The Mellow Bridge”, then dissolved into the winds as though she, herself, was the wind.
They reappeared, not in the hospital, but in a run-down abandon house. The child appeared on a brown carpet, with the unconscious body still on her lap. Around her sat three teenagers, two boys and one girl. The girl had messy brown hair, that ran down to her shoulders ,and bright blue eyes, the boy who sat beside her looked exactly the same except his hair was spikier and went down to the lower part of his ear. They were most likely twins. While, the boy on the far left had black hair that covered his right eye, and bright green eyes. They soon took notice to the child, and ended there argument immediately.
“Were you able-” the brown headed boy in the middle started, but was interrupted by the child, “No sir, she had already killed everyone when I got there, but she’s unharmed I believe this is acceptable.” she was calm, while the others were not as pleased. “Kitty, hundred’s of people were just killed be-” the girl on the right was now cut of by kitty, “look,” she said anger rising in her voice, “ I did my best, I have her now, so the mission was a success.”. no one farther argued with her; no one dared.
“Now, Jared, take her to the bedroom, I‘ll be there in a minute to clean her up.” kitty said looking at the brown headed boy in the middle. He nodded, then looked at the black headed boy, “could you help me carry her, Chris?” he asked him, Chris nodded .Then the two boys got up and helped carry the body in to a different room. “you know, mother will not like this.” the brown haired girl stated, while getting up off the ground. “maybe, maybe not. She might like it that some of those humans aren’t around to ruin her earth ,anymore.” the child said bluntly , and left into the other room. “and she might not like that, either.” the brown headed girl stated, even though kitty had left.
I awoke suddenly, “Were am I?” I whispered softly. I was in a bed, not on the cold, wooden flooring from the hospital I was in last night. A boy with messy brown hair ancestral blue eyes entered the room. At first not noticing that I had awakened, then slowly he turned, “Hi, Maddie.” he greeted me, I pulled my knees up to my chest, into the fetal position. “What’s going on?” I thought to myself. “I’m Jared” he introduced himself, “Kitty will be here in a minute to ,um, help answer your questions.” he laughed at his final words and disappeared into a doorway on the right side of the room.
Then, on the left side of the room, a little girl with clear grey eyes ,and lovely black hair entered the room. “Hi” I greeted her, making her head pop up, “Oh, your awake. Well, I’m Kathleena ,but everyone calls me Kitty.” she introduced herself. “Yesterday, the day when you killed all those people, was the day I found you. If you were wondering. Me, Jared, Chris, and Jenny live here, we’re all alike ,but not all related. Jared and Jenny are twins, its very easy to tell. Me and Chris and brother and sister, me being five years older than him and Jared.” she giggled at that, “so, he like five?” I questioned. “no, he’s fifteen!” she sounded offended, “Father time gave me the gift of immortality…” she said, In a hushed manner. “oh..” I said, it was really all I could say.
“now, lets figure out if you’re my sister or Jared’s.” she clapped. “your hair is more on Jared’s side ,but your face is more… between. Oh! Your eyes are defiantly not father times, there golden!” she stated, then sighed, “guess Jared and Jenny have a new step-sister.”. I shrugged my shoulder in an okay manner, then sat up a bit straighter. Guessing this was to be my new home, not out of choice ,but of force.
- by Miami Suki |
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- | Submitted on 11/22/2009 |
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- Title: Nature's child
- Artist: Miami Suki
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okay this has been revised and editted so many times the fist draft is COVERED in lines (crossing out original sentences) hope you like it!
MM - Date: 11/22/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kisa8 - 12/21/2009
- This is awesome! Ignore what people say about editing, worry about that later just enjoy writing it first and for-most! smile
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- RyRyTerrify The Claymore - 12/21/2009
- This was so good biggrin the editing isn't such a big deal and people only bring it up to make themselves sound intelligent xD This is really good and you definitely deserve a lot of praise for it.
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- JohnLeprechaun - 11/25/2009
- Okay, obviously you didn't do enough editing. There are so many errors in the first sentence alone that it scared me away from the rest. Try putting it through a spell check or maybe a peer review. Then we can talk about the plotline and stuff like that.
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