- Molly Gibbons is a 12 year old girl who lives in Pittsburgh,PA. She goes to Carbor Junior High. She has 4 brothers and sisters. Her dad lives in Buffalo, New York, She has 2 friends named Adria. and Camilia. One day she was walking hoe with her friends when this little boy walked along. First he asked all of them to come with him. Molly thought it was wrong and walked home by herself. When she got home the house was emptied. The doorbell rang. First Molly looked through the peephole. It was the same boy from earlier. , but he looked angrier. He had red stains all over him. Molly ran into her baby sister's room to find out her sister was home alone this whole time. Molly went downstairs to see her house looking even emptier. She was scared she wanted to run really far away. The doorbell rang again. Molly had just remembered her mom forgot to pay the phone bill. So she was stuck in a empty house. At first she cried after that she peeked through the window to see cops questioning neighbors. She gets frightened. She ran right back upstairs to find her twin brothers Micheal and Martin in their room by themselves. She checked all the windows. The doorbell rang again and then there was a "THUMP"! She grabbed her siblings including her baby sister and hid in a closet. When the cops get upstairs they went into all the closets first. Molly dropped her siblings down the laundry shoot. They found themselves in their basement. Molly got all her siblings toys and food all together and stuffed them in their strollers then put the kids in there.. Then she ran put the back door and through a couple alleys. to find her self in the suburbs. At first she looked along the streets for quarters to get her a pay phone. She finally found a quarter, so she called her mom, but the line was busy. When she looked across the street she saw he boy again. She ran as fast as she could until she found this enormous empty shed. While she was in thew shed she fed her baby sister and played with her brothers. Then there was a knock at the door. Molly was confused for a minute because now this boy looked familiar. She remembered him to be her old neighbor. Molly looked through the window to see the boy again. There was no way out she was surrounded. Finally she confronted her problems and opened the door. He was very angry. At first he got his fist ready to hit her. Before he got the chance to hit her he chocked her. Fifteen minutes later she died. When her siblings woke up they cried as they watched their older sister lay on the ground solemnly. When a neighborhood cop drove by and saw them he ran in. He pronounced Molly dead. The policemen contacted their mom and dad. Her mom cried for hours until her eyes started to bleed. 3 years later the police department closed the case unsolved. Molly's baby sister was now 4 but still dramatized from Moll's tragedy. Molly never had a chance to become a super model or go to Paris. Especially see her younger sibling grow up. On Molly's supposed 16th birthday the police re-opened Molly's case. The police who helped Molly's siblings later married Molly's mom. Molly's dad died of a diabetic coma. Molly's mother later gave birth to another daughter who she named Molly Gibbons.
- by kandii_deva |
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- | Submitted on 10/24/2009 |
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- Title: The series of Molly Gibbons
- Artist: kandii_deva
- Description: One day Molly Gibbons life took a dramatic change for the worst. When a unfamiliar little boy taunts her. Does she live or does she die. Take a look inside the story to find out.
- Date: 10/24/2009
- Tags: mysterious tragic spooky fiction
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- Cellotastic - 01/01/2010
- There's potential here, but you didn't really develop the story well. The little boy didn't taunt her; she saw him on the road. You've got aways to go, but you can get there. Keep trying. 2/5.
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