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My name is Jamie. I am not your ordinary girl and i have to tell you a story. well here it goes. My mom and dad work as top secret scientist and i am the only person besides the people who hired. SO i am just going to come clean, the united states have not been telling the people who live in the united states epeshally the people who live between new york and canada that there are weird thing starting to movie from unknown places well............... they just call the creatures THE UNKNOWN. I would just call them the things but if my mo found out that i call them the things she would have a lecture about "thats not what they are called,"
But to get the story going here are the facts................
To be continued...................................................................................
- by Droughtsef |
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- | Submitted on 09/13/2009 |
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- Title: the thing called UNKNOWN......
- Artist: Droughtsef
- Description: the horrifying thing that was not supposed to be discovered.
- Date: 09/13/2009
- Tags: thing called unknown
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ii_Smexii_Converse_ii - 10/11/2009
- It was good! :3 Check your spelling though...5/5
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- Sexual Karma - 09/30/2009
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If you're going to submit something into the arena you should at least spell check, and use proper grammar no one is going to want to read this because it's so incredibly hard to read. Try typing the stories up in Microsoft word before posting it so you at least spell the words right.
The proper way to do a pause is "..." no more no less.
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