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poem to edward:
i love your smile,
your glowing skin.
your warm brown eyes,
i always fall in.
your cool breath,
gives me chills.
your smooth silky hair,
gives you thrills.
your personality,
is not the best.
your heart so still,
hasen't passed the test.
your too close i need my space,
all i have to say is get out of my face.
- by XtoxicXrainbowXraverX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/22/2009 |
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- Title: a poem dedicaded to edward
- Artist: XtoxicXrainbowXraverX
- Description: its a gift for i think one of the biggest edward fans eeeveerrrr!!!!!!!!!!
- Date: 07/22/2009
- Tags: poem dedicaded edward
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Tenacious Thomas - 07/22/2009
- firstly its you're not your.before i own you for being being such a slave to todays trends,i will review this.1/5. Edwards skin doesnt glow that what supposed to be cool about him.isnt he supposed to be a monster they dont have soft welcoming eyes. cool breath that he took from the twilight chick to some blonde chick. Gives him thrills? This whole thing makes me throw up.his personality is not the real edward and the fake both act like they're the s##t.i had a whole thing but no space, just die.
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- hannaj_luvz_mitchell - 07/22/2009
- nice poem
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