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I awoke in an old shack.There was a candle ligth.But it was a faint glow.I herd something rattle.I felt something touch shoulder.I jumped up.I tried running to the other side of the room when i tripped.I landed on my face.I grunted.I noticed my feet had been tied.I tired to untie my feet but the it was no use.I would need a knife if I wanted my feet loose.I herd the sound again.I grab te candle.What I saw made me gasp. surprised .''Jason?Is that you?'' I asked.My voice was shaking.''Angela?'' replied the voice.I put the candle down.I looked at him and he looked at me.He was dirty and he had on a black muscle shirt and black pants.I noticed his boots and his feet had been tied as well.I was wearing black pants,black boots,cuff links, a black ruby necklace and, a black tank top.''How did you get down here?'' I asked throwing my arms around him.He hugged me tight and set me in is lap.I put my arms around his neck.I kissed him gently.''I got here the same way you did.'' said Jason.''Heather?'' I growled.''No.Thats who brought you here?No Jake brought me here.You know Heather's boyfriend.'' repled Jason.''Wow.I swear IF we ever get out of here ALIVE then Im gonna rip Heather's head off! scream '' I said.He laughed.Something pooked me in my jeans.I pulled it out.It was my bacl up cell phone. ''Jason look!'' I tried turning it on.It was turning on.I pulled the back off it off.There was not battery.I through the phone at the wall.''Is it still night?'' I asked.''Yeah, Angela you were out for two days.'' Jason laughed.I shurgged.''And you have been missing for 4 weeks.'' I said.We both laughed. We sat there talking for what seemed like hours but was only 30 mins.Then the shack door opend.''Time to go.'' said the person at the dor.I tightend my arms around Jason.Another man appered in the door way.One of the men came towards me and tried to pry me off.The other guy tried to pull jason off me.They finally pulled me off Jason.I started kicking.The man got his arm around my chest.''Let go!''I screamed.Jason struggled himself to get loose.I kicked the man in shin.He fell to the ground and released me.Three more guys rushed in.The pilled on Jason.''JASON!'' I screamed as the pushed him out the door.Then I noticed four girls walk in.The grabbed at me.One pinned me to the floor.Her knees were on my arms.''Get off.'' I hissed.I felt my feet being untied.Then I herd chains.And someone was dragging something.I saw something come in to veiw.It was a a big long boared.The girls laoded me on the board.One girl took the chains and starpped me to the boared.I screamed to the top of my lungs.Another girl got a roll of ducktape and tapped my mout shut.She took the ducktape and wrapped it around my mouth several times.I mumbled.I struggled getting free.They picked up the boared and carried me into the moonlight.Then they took me into the old house.They led me down into what seemed like a basment.One of the girls tied my hands and feet with chains and untied the one around my chest.they threw me on the floor.After that I blackend out again.When I woke I was outside.I was still straped to that domb baored.I was set in the grass. I gazed up into the sky.''Dieing at the age of 16.Great!'' I thought.I started struggling to get free.I noticed tht the duct tape had been removed.My black hair swayed in the wind.I finally loosend the chains around my chest.I wiggled out and I wrapped my hand around my knees.I finally got up and went into the house.I went into a bedroom.There was a full sized mirror.You know the ones that you can see your whole body.So I looked at myself and asped.My hair had been fixed it was a little curled and it looked shiny from being brushed so many times.Then I had on a tank top,but this one was clean and black.I had on boots.Like goth boots by the look of it.I had on dark blue jean SHORTS!OMG!OMG!OMG!I don't wear shorts.I had on makeup.For once I kinda looked......cute!I herd someone across the hall.I went toward the sound.Yea I'm dumb,I know.Your not supposed go toward the sound.You run away from it.I went into the room and found Jason.He looked diffrent to.No shirt,(HA!) goth boots, and kinda ripped blue jean pants.His hair was still a shiny dirty blond color.I rushed to him.I ripped off the tape around his mouth.He jerked up.''Good your awake.; i laughed.I untied his hands and feet.''Wow.Angela you look great.'' he said.''Yea cause thats what every girl wants to hear when they've been kidnapped.Aren't you cold.You don't have a shirt on and your six pack is showing.'' I laughed.''Lets just get out of here.'' he mumbled.We walked out into the backyard.I didn't notice what was behind me until it hit me.''Owww!'' I said. I turned around and I really shouldn't have.Jason was at the gate and he was running toward me.The person behind me stabbed a knife in arm. I screamed in pain.Jason punched the person out.I pulled the knife out of my arm.Jason picked me up and carried me into the ally.He began running.''It's really good thing that I made you ty out for track.'' I said.I hel my wound.It was gushing blood.''Get a taxi.'' I said.Jason ran anyway.We reached the highway when he decided to stop and take a breather.''Were almost home Angela.'' said Jason.He began to run again.''No don't go home just take us to a hotel.'' I said.''Ok.They would probably look for us there first.'' agreed Jason.''But I'm gona take you to the hospital first.'' said Jason.We stopped at the Hospital door.''You need a shirt.'' I said.''Um can you get me one from the gift shop?'' he asked.I luaghed.I went in and came right back out.''Here, It's a black shirt with a skull.'' I said holding out the shirt.He put it on.We walked in the hospital.We walked to the front desk.Jason told them about our problem.A nurse lead us into a room.A doctor walked in with some supplies.I sat down with Jason.I squezzed his hand when the doctor was putting in the stiches.He rapped up my wound.I payed him and we left.''Ok now carry me to the hotel room.'' I said.I laughed when he picked me up.''Lets go lazy.'' he laughed.
- by Xxx2Goth Princess2xxX |
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- | Submitted on 07/14/2009 |
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- Title: Batrayed By a Friend Chapter 2
- Artist: Xxx2Goth Princess2xxX
- Description: Comment and rate plz!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
- Date: 07/14/2009
- Tags: betrayedbyafriend chapter2
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Xxninja_kiwixX - 07/07/2010
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i liked it(even tho it wasnt seperated lol) now....
is there going to be a part 3?
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- M0NST3R iiN Y0UR B3D - 05/08/2010
- Seperate your work into paragraphs, use spell check. It might pass for a good story in the Writing Arena. 3/5
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- Xxx2Goth Princess2xxX - 07/26/2009
- Yea i know. There are some things wrong with it but idc cause i like to write my way lol thank u guys for rating and commenting! biggrin
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- cherryfrapp - 07/24/2009
- there are quite a few spelling mistakes. also you should try and brake it up into paragraphs. other than that i think is ok.
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- Annelise loves polka dots - 07/21/2009
- alright, nvm, im not going to read it cuz i havent read chapter 1, i will rate high though smile
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- Annelise loves polka dots - 07/21/2009
- alright, i havent read it yet, but just to warn you, people are going to be really mean about your not putting any paragraphs in it. i'm just warning you, i dont care, because i do it too wink
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