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I’m back into this dark world but now I’m standing where I was before. The girl is still there seating and not crying anymore. But there’s still a hint of sadness in her face. I sat down and looked straight at her. I would never get tired of this beautiful face. I would sacrifice everything just to be with her and make her happy. I touched the barrier exactly where her face reflects. I could see my hands shaking as I gently stroke the cold barrier. I stared at her my complete attention is for her only, until a shadow was forming behind her. It grew bigger and bigger there was something coming out of it. I immediately stood up and started banging the barrier. Nothing happened; she couldn’t hear or see me.
STOP!
DON’T HURT HER!
GET AWAY FROM HER!
I shouted again and again. While I kept on banging the barrier, a monster has come out from the shadow. It looked at my direction as if it could see me. I got stunned from what I saw. It was the boy in the mirror. He’d grown bigger and his skin tone is paler than before. He still got that evil look and smile on his face. He just stared at me and didn’t move one muscle. I started pounding the barrier again.
GET AWAY FROM HER! SHE’S MINE!
I shouted on top of my lungs.
~to be continued …
- by RockPunkPrince |
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- | Submitted on 07/03/2009 |
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- Title: Trapped (Part 9)
- Artist: RockPunkPrince
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Description:
have you ever been trapped in you own dream? your own world? somewhere anything can happen ...
~please read the first parts, first :)
pls. rate ill accept any criticism i know im not that good with writing yet tell me any suggestions anything to make it more interesting :D - Date: 07/03/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- blackman556 - 07/05/2009
- im loving it
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- lucky marianna - 07/05/2009
- It's starting to be romantic...
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