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As i walk through our kitchen my feet felt the coldness of the floor, I forgot to wear my slippers. I went straight to the bathroom and took off my clothes and opened the shower. I shivered as my bare skin felt the icy water, but i still feel sleepy. After my body absorbed the temperature of the cold water I turned the shower off and looked at the mirror. I saw a boy staring straight blankly at me, it copied everything i do. But I've got this feeling like that boy in the mirror wasn't me like it was someone else. I looked down on the sink and closed my eyes for a few seconds. As i raised my head i opened my eyes the boy in the mirror was gone. And all that is left is a blank mirror. My heart starts to pound really fast, then I'm grasping for my breath. My left hand turned into a fist as if my brain brought the signal without my consent. Within a few seconds I heard the mirror break into pieces and felt a sore on my left hand.
~to be continued ...
- by RockPunkPrince |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: Trapped (part 2)
- Artist: RockPunkPrince
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Description:
have you ever been trapped in you own dream? your own world? somewhere anything can happen ...
~please read the first parts, first :) - Date: 06/24/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- blackman556 - 06/28/2009
- wow, you are good, i could vision it in my head
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- lucky marianna - 06/28/2009
- I really like the part with the mirror,It's a little creepy however I want to hear more noises and know what your character is thinking,that way you r gonna make it more real and spooky biggrin
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- Daft Moron - 06/26/2009
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nice =)
now I'm to read the other parts =D - Report As Spam
- lvhtjsnlwys101 - 06/24/2009
- this is good. keep writing
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- twinkle caramel candy - 06/24/2009
- wink
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