Their Gift

• Artist: Duchess Florianne
• Description: part 2!
• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: their gift

I sat in class bored out of my head.I looked at the cover of the book.I traced my finger along the title.Then I noticed that this wasn't my book.I had been carrying Dracula not Frankenstien.I knew that this was the boy's book.Not my own.The bell finally rang.I rushed out and looked for the boy.I saw him through a gigantic crowd.I screamed"Wait!Wait!You've got my book!I have your book!"I ran through the crowd to the boy and whispered,"I have your book."He smiled and traded books with me."Are you new here?"he said with an accent from somwhere far east in the Transylvanian area.I smiled and nodded."Let me show you to your next class.I'll walk with you ."he said.Hypnotized,I followed him to my next class.

Comments

[Reginia X]

._.;

..I dun see part 1.

Otherwise pretty boring..

It's not really much of anything. Just below average in all areas x_x;

[VocaloidLen002]

So far so good, but like light-dark said, there are a few spell and gram errors

[Light-Dark12]

Hm... could use some grammar and spelling fixing... but I think it has a good storyline so far.