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tab CRASH.
tab I looked down at all the glass that shattered. I knew we were never going to make out of here. Well not alive, at the very least. I felt a hand turn up my chin. Like always I felt like he read my mind.
tab "Don't give up."
tab I didn't want to give up but what was I suppose to do? We weren't going to be able to go home. We'd have to be on the run, but from the way he looked at me, I could tell he didn't mind leaving everything behind. He shouldn't feel that way about me. I shouldn't be feeling that way about him.
tab "Just follow me and stay down low." I said, "We need to get to a room with a window. Then try to get out of here." How exactly were we going to do that, I wasn't quite sure. We were on the third floor of the building. It was lucky that I decided to drive today. A glass vase shattered above my head, making me cut and scratch my palms as we crawled to our safety.
tab "You won't make it out." A voice said. Hearing that voice made my skin crawl. I knew who he was and coulndn't believe that he woould betray me. But I didn't have to think about that. "I won't let you." I could tell he was going to start talking, which meant he wouldn't be able to hear us moving glass. I felt a tug behind me and stopped.
tab "Dont' move." It looked liked Xander stopped breathing. "He's trying to distract us. Just wait."
tab It amazed me that he wasn't a Deletor. He would have made a great one. I stared at him, imaging what it would be like if my life was normal. I wouldn't be able to protect him, that's for sure, but perhaps he wouldn't need a Savior. He stared back, thinking only God knows what. Did I love him? No. Not yet. I was a monster. I wasn't allowed to love someone like him. But he trusted me. Trust that I did not deserve. I didn't want to get held up in sorrow. I needed to get us out alive.
tab "Come on. Let's go."
- by night_sky_moon_day |
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- | Submitted on 06/18/2009 |
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- Title: Ryter: Prologue
- Artist: night_sky_moon_day
- Description: Prologue. This is the beginning of Ryter. It was titled as "UNTITLED" But I thought of a name. Enjoy!
- Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: untilted love ryter
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Comments (5 Comments)
- mintroar - 06/25/2009
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it's good. it's easy to understand what the character is feeling since the story's narrated in her head. A little suggestion though, you should also try to describe what they are doing like....
"I don't think we'll make it out alive." Arvin said in a low tone while holding my hand. His voice was shivering just as his body. His face was pale and his hands were ice cold with fear. The image of our inevitable death made us frightened. - Report As Spam
- Clapper Cheeks - 06/19/2009
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Ugh. Now you got me wanting to read more. > sad It sounds great. 5.
Thanks for commenting on my story. - Report As Spam
- Hunni Bunches of Lucien - 06/19/2009
- its really good. ^-^ 5/5!
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- Kari-Sweet22 - 06/18/2009
- i like this nice suspense
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- iPandaChan99 - 06/18/2009
- Pretty Good, 4/5
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