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A howl breaks through the increasing silence as the night sky grows darker. A bright light shines a figure glides gracefully down the deserted road. She has hair as black as the midnight sky and wears a beautiful white wedding gown. Fog follows her as she stop in front of the only house there.
The TV is flickering as a man lies on the couch, drunk. A mouse can be heard squeaking throughout the house. As the clock strikes 12, haze instantly fills the room, along with a low moaning sound. The man turns his head, eyes pleading as he stares at the white woman.
"Please.......please....." is all he whispered as the woman continues to stare at him. "....please......"
The woman lets out a high pitched scream as she lunges toward the man;s throat. The she disappears; the man is dead.
The detective investigates the death. Turns out the victim once had a beautiful wife, but after 3 years of marriage, he became abusive. Then he starts to go out on a rape spree. When the wife found out, he killed her just to keep his secret. As she was dying, she said, "I'll come back to kill you...."
- by RavenMasen15 |
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- | Submitted on 06/11/2009 |
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- Title: The White Woman
- Artist: RavenMasen15
- Description: just something i wrote during study hall. wanted to try my hand at a death story. comment and tell me what you think.
- Date: 06/11/2009
- Tags: white woman
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sally Spearow - 06/17/2011
- ooooooo. Creepy buy really good!!
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- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 06/16/2009
- oh that was very good kind of short but it was great any how i give it a 4/5
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- iiLuv Angel - 06/15/2009
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i love it 4 1/2 star! how do u come up with this stuff?
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- Paramore2789 - 06/12/2009
- That was good except that you didn't add much description and it all went really fast. But it was scary and well played. Read my work!
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