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Hitomi Emiko Murakami, a young new middle school girl looking forward for the new school year. Even if her name is Hitomi, everyone calls her Emiko. Emiko loved love storys, little did she know, she herself would fall in love. Hiroshi, also a new middle school boy first met Emiko on the first day of school. Emiko was running in the hallways trying to make it to her class in time when hiroshi, who was also in a hurry was to busy to notice that emiko was running toward him. then They crashed into each other. Hiroshi helped her up, and when emiko was late for class,he blamed it on himself .emiko was stunned. "why would a boy help me ?" "i thought boys didnt like girls" these questions ran all over emiko's mind. One day while walking home from school, emiko looked to the other side and saw hiroshi. Emiko looked at him" you". Hiroshi stopped and looked to his side. " its you. that boy who saved me from getting in trouble" said emiko. " I never got to say thank you"..said emiko. " it was no problem" hiroshi replied. " it wasnt your fault" hiroshi smiled. emiko smiled. "so were are you going?" emiko kept walking. "home" hiroshi replied. " i guess we'll be seeing more of each other from know on" emiko replied. From that day on.. emiko had feeling for hiroshi. One day while walking home from school Hiroshi walked over to emiko's side of the street and gave her a kiss.
to be continued.....
- by Aroused Nintendo |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/21/2009 |
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- Title: Don't forget me...
- Artist: Aroused Nintendo
- Description: looking for a love story? read the story! XD btw not finished
- Date: 04/21/2009
- Tags: dont forget
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Aroused Nintendo - 05/04/2009
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reply to first post of Koiryn: no just tyring to sound excited.
reply to second post: right sorry sweatdrop ugh! i need to work on my grammar! i know! i know!
reply to third post: like i said...im working on it! - Report As Spam
- rockguitarhedgehog1 - 05/04/2009
- I can't read this; there's no breaks, it just goes on and on...You also didn't capitalize Emiko many times
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- rockguitarhedgehog1 - 05/04/2009
- you said "from know on" you know....Also, at one part, you didn't capitalize Hiroshi. Isn't that his name?
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- rockguitarhedgehog1 - 05/04/2009
- "Emiko loved love storys, little did she know, she herself would fall in love." were you excited or something?
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- Leita_Von_Freak - 04/21/2009
- i like it, its cute^^
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- Aroused Nintendo - 04/21/2009
- ok np i'll work on that
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- Cl3v3rRey - 04/21/2009
- You need to explain more and give more detail and the story is going to fast.
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