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Alice yawned, streching. My last Saturday before Summer Break ends...She sighed.She alertly grabbed her timer and stared at the sky. It passed by her in a fraction of time. 3.56 seconds. She recored her findings.
I timed the thing. 3.56 seconds excatly. It is extremely fast, yet so...bright. What could it mean? Maybe I should try to....chase it next Saturday?
Alice spun around in her chair, turning on her computer and clicking on a shortcut she used ofen-Wikipedia.Dhe searched fairy. One sentance caught her eye. 'Folklorists have suggested that their actual origin lies in a conquered race living in hiding.' If fairies hide, how could she have possibly seen one fly by?
Then, she seached shooting star. The entrey didn't give much information, and the information wasnt very helpful. She wrote more in her journal.
Last, she searched for the word 'Meteor'. She found an Wikipedia entrey. It's desription sounded much like this....thing.. Could it possibly be a Meteor?
I have decided over two possible things it might be:
Meteor
Shooting Star
Fairy
This concept was very confusing. Meteor was her best guess.It COULD be a Fairy, but her information didn't lead to that conclusion.
Last night, she had a dream. A very stange one, indeed.
- by Y is for Yuki |
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- | Submitted on 04/20/2009 |
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- Title: Did You See That Ch.2
- Artist: Y is for Yuki
- Description: Sorry it took so long!
- Date: 04/20/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- torn_between_two_worlds - 04/22/2009
- very good i like it
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- XtornN2X - 04/20/2009
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I really like it. ^_^ Very interesting.
For some editing advice, I'd switch the paragraph of her searching the shooting star, with the search of the fairies. .^. but thats just my opinon, keep it the same if you really feel that it is right.
After all it is ur story right?
.^.4/5
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