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Tears came slowly. My hands just stung. My knees were the same as my eyes. Dripping with some kind of liquid. I can't understand why. "JEN!!" Derek yelled. "What??? Tell me Derek please!!" I answered crying. "Your side....," Derek stopped. "Derek WHAT ABOUT MY SI....Si.....OH MY GOD!!" I was sobbing even harder. I could barley brethe. The pocket knife i had used cluched in my side deep, to deep to pull out without screaming. I never understood why i had great balence my whole famliy were so unbalenced, exsept of corse Derek and I. But this week my familys unbalenceness was becoming a part of me. Now I couldn't breathe. I couldn't walk. I could barley think. I was mumbling to myself the same sentence. Over and over again. "God save me, please save me." "C'mon Jenna." Derek couldn't look at me. " NO NO NO NO!! DEREK I CANT MOVE!!!!" Derek touched my side. *SHLICK* "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOO! PLEASE GODD NOOO!!!!!" I was yelling and screaming. "oh no.." Derek whispered.
To Be Continued.......
- by Save the world stopmypain |
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- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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- Title: The Men Part 3
- Artist: Save the world stopmypain
- Description: FINALLY!!
- Date: 03/25/2009
- Tags: themenpart3
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Save the world stopmypain - 11/21/2009
- Me and my friend made it lol we have, part 1 2 3 4 and 5
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- XoX_RaiNb0w_Sh3rBeRt_XoX - 04/05/2009
- I dont get it!
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- xXpurrfectXx - 04/03/2009
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Nice, but just one thing,
Work on your grammer, punctuation, and spelling. XD hope that helps. - Report As Spam