A Walk In The Park

• Artist: Alice_Cullen135792468
• Description: What if one day the cute girl next door takes a walk alone and you follow her. but as you follow her you realize that shes acting funny.
• Date: 03/10/2009
• Tags: walk park

One day while Robert was coming home from soccer practice he saw Frankie, the cute girl next door, go off into the woods. Robert followed her. One they were deep in the woods he noticed Frankie was acting funny. She threw her backpack down and climbed up into a treehouse. Robert followed climbing up the treehouse he found himself face to face with Frankie. Her face was muddy and her blue eyes showed thrue her long black bangs she slowly pulled out a knife. That was when Robert recognized her as the murderer from the news last week. She stabbed him. To this day no one knows where Robert went.

Comments

[tigerlilly1888]

It as good until the ending. the ending was dull and needed spice rather than a grade school ending

[Demonhate]

that was very interesting. it sounds though that robert is an idiot. i would have jumped out of the treehouse when i saw the knife.

[PrincessJesyxoxo]

that was kinda short lol but it was good it sounded kinda like somthing off the news lol. Not to be mean or anything but isn't Frankie a guys name?

[Mega Guardian]

That's rather short. any continuation?